hurt

I wanted to comment on this earlier but got all mixed up. I can't remember the exact term (could be contrast) but it's cool how you've seperated the image into color, and darkness. (Contrast? is that it?) Great shot overall, shows emotion and gives a very warm feeling. The only thig I would change: Crop the image just a bit to keep in consideration with the "rule of thirds." Right now, my eyes don't know exactly where they should be focusing. As for the writing it is totally the opposite of my style but I still like it. Perhaps needs proper punctuation (Something I've been taught to wtch out for recently!) I would like to see one more verse. You just get me started, then drop me off. I want to know why and when! You've given me who and what! Good job man, can't wait to see some more of both.